(11-26-2022, 12:26 PM)Predator Wrote: Terrific idea for a story that a lot would love to read, so why not go for it my friend? A guy whose Achilles Heel is during an orgasm is great, I’ve only used it as a moment of distraction in my stories but this inherent vulnerability is so much hotter. You’ve got the nucleus for an incredibly hot story that leaves so may question for the reader to enjoy being answered; Was the guy he was having sex with in on it? What was the motive? Revenge? You own this so why not make it happen? Don’t like the use of the word ‘porn’ here though!

(11-26-2022, 04:45 AM)Morben Wrote: I have this idea for a story or something that could be made into a movie clip. I’ve always had a fascination with big strong guys with perfect physique, confident, powerful, seemingly indestructible, and when they suddenly get that sword piercing those perfect muscles and he is caught by surprise, suddenly realising that what was almost unthinkable has happened to him, there is a look of pain but at the same time shock and the realisation that what he had inflicted on so many others on the battlefield, has now become his end.

My story would be based on a strong muscular with perfect looks - an Adonis. Who like Achilles in Greek mythology, is indestructible, except for one weakness, if he falls in love with a guy and has sex, at the moment of orgasm is the only point where his protection is not there and he can be killed by a sword piercing his heart from the back. The look on his face as the sword pierced his back goes through his heart and the silver point comes out the front, when he looks down to see the point silver end of the sword, pain and the final acknowledgment of his death is clear in his eyes and facial expression as he falls to his knees and slowly weaken and falls onto his back lifeless