06-28-2021, 02:34 AM
(06-27-2021, 09:48 PM)Predator Wrote: The following is just my own subjective critique and I only offer it because you have requested comments. Please be aware that a lack of comments is not uncommon on this forum and is not, in itself, a reflection of the quality of one’s work.thank you for your comment. It's really helpful.
Your descriptive writing is very good but the non fetish sexual content is too much for me - sorry. Also I find stabbings from behind, whether or not it exits through the navel, not to be very exciting.
I would definitely encourage you to continue writing and I look forward to reading a hot new story from you.