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Idea for story
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I have this idea for a story or something that could be made into a movie clip. I’ve always had a fascination with big strong guys with perfect physique, confident, powerful, seemingly indestructible, and when they suddenly get that sword piercing those perfect muscles and he is caught by surprise, suddenly realising that what was almost unthinkable has happened to him, there is a look of pain but at the same time shock and the realisation that what he had inflicted on so many others on the battlefield, has now become his end.

My story would be based on a strong muscular with perfect looks - an Adonis. Who like Achilles in Greek mythology, is indestructible, except for one weakness, if he falls in love with a guy and has sex, at the moment of orgasm is the only point where his protection is not there and he can be killed by a sword piercing his heart from the back. The look on his face as the sword pierced his back goes through his heart and the silver point comes out the front, when he looks down to see the point silver end of the sword, pain and the final acknowledgment of his death is clear in his eyes and facial expression as he falls to his knees and slowly weaken and falls onto his back lifeless
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Idea for story - by Morben - 11-26-2022, 04:45 AM
RE: Idea for porn story - by Predator - 11-26-2022, 12:26 PM
RE: Idea for porn story - by Morben - 11-26-2022, 10:40 PM
RE: Idea for story - by s_kinnydipper_35 - 11-27-2022, 06:02 PM
RE: Idea for story - by jim825 - 11-27-2022, 08:53 PM
RE: Idea for story - by erogalet - 01-05-2023, 03:55 PM

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