11-26-2022, 12:26 PM
Terrific idea for a story that a lot would love to read, so why not go for it my friend? A guy whose Achilles Heel is during an orgasm is great, I’ve only used it as a moment of distraction in my stories but this inherent vulnerability is so much hotter. You’ve got the nucleus for an incredibly hot story that leaves so may question for the reader to enjoy being answered; Was the guy he was having sex with in on it? What was the motive? Revenge? You own this so why not make it happen? Don’t like the use of the word ‘porn’ here though!