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The Courage of a Manly Death
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I had always been curious what it would feel like to feel the pain of defeat. More specifically the pain of dying by a sword through my belly. Every time I went to battle the belly would be my target. And now was no exception. As my forces overtook the savages of the forest the battle began to die down but I wanted more! Being this close to death always made me feel more alive. A savage lay at my feet with several arrows in his gut. I rested my sword on his chest and his eyes grew wide as I slowly pushed. Blood spewed from his mouth and I just grinned. 
“Enjoy it boy! It’s the only death you’ll get,” I told him. As his eyes began to glaze over he looked me right in the eyes and with his remaining strength managed to puff out his chest a bit. I was taken aback at the boys courage. At that point I had the overwhelming urge to join him. To test my own courage. And just like that I decided I was going to do it. I was going to let some savage show me up. I crossed to my second in command Calix who was overseeing a restrained  prisoner.
“Another victory Commander! We have retained some prisoners for labor and-“
I held up my hand cutting him off. 
“Calix I command you to leave the prisoner be and draw your sword.” The boy looked confused as I unfastened the straps on my armor. 
“Sir I must get this savage back to camp-“ I held up my hand again and he stopped. “Enough with the prisoner lad. I’ve come to decision. I’m not going to be outdone by lesser men,” I told him as my breastplate fell to the ground. I ripped the sweat stained tunic off baring my hairy chest. 
“I intend to show my own courage today by dying a mans death!” I said. Calix looked stunned but the prisoner smiled. 
“You want enemy?,” he asked thumping his massive pecs.
”I need a man who can kill me,” I replied as I loosened the belt around my waist “think you can do that?” 

The savage grinned and held up his chained hands. 
“Unbind him Calix.”
“Sir you cant be serious. To die at the hands of one so untrained is an insult,” Calix began. 
“I have made my choice. I want to die a man today. You can either join me or get out of my way but either way this is going to happen.”
The lad turned back to the prisoner and began to unlock his chains. The savage shook of his bonds and stood tall. He was even bigger than I first thought. Truly deserving to be called savage. Calix remained and looked at the savage in awe. 
“I am scared to do so Commander but if the offer to join you was true I would like to die with you,” he said. He looked nervous but began to take off his armor as well. 
“You die as a man today Calix!”  I drew my sword from the dirt and gestured around to the prisoner.
“Pick a weapon my savage friend. There are many to choose from.”
“Daemon” he roared at me then thumped his chest again “me is Daemon.” 
“Daemon then. Choose your weapon.” He looked around him until he found a short sword. In his hands it looked like a mere knife. He cut the fastenings on his kilt and bared his manhood with a meaty flop as it smacked his thigh. 
“Dead men need no covering,” Daemon told me. I dropped my undergarment smiling like a child as I kicked them to the side. Calix did the same and Daemon roared with laughter coming closer to me. 
“You men are like children compared to me!” he said as he put his massive cock against my own. He for sure had me beat. Calix came closer to us as well his own cock sticking straight up. 

“My cock is rock hard and this beast is still bigger than me!,” the lad said as Daemon compared there cocks side by side. The smile faded quickly though as Daemon stepped back. The time had come. My sword twitched in my hand. 
“So how do we do this Commander?,” Calix asked his voice just a bit nervous. I was about to respond when Daemon decided for both of us. He stepped close again only this time stabbing me deep in the gut. 
“Uurrrrrrkkkkkkk!,” I groaned as the sword went further. 
“Sir!” Calix said. 
“Calm yourself boy!” I said with difficulty as Daemon pulled the blade out. I watched as the bloody steel came out of my stomach. 
“Wound not very deep,” Daemon told me “We go deeper as we get closer to death.” Calix responded by thrusting his sword into Daemons hulking hairy belly. Instead of getting angry, Daemon merely laughed as Calix stabbed him. The blade went sliced into him where a long trail of hair bisected his gut. 
“Very good boy” he said grabbing Calix’s bulging bicep and pulled the blade into himself grunting a bit “arm should be straighter.” The hole in my abs leaked blood. As soon as Calix had removed his sword from Daemon I angled my own towards his stomach. The lad had always been muscled but had only just started sprouting hair on his chest with a long happy trail snaking down his belly. With no warning I thrust into his midsection. “Aaaafffffnkkk!,” he yelled out bending under the weight of the blade. 
“No escape from blade,” Daemon said to Calix “Push out belly. Men should enjoy the pain.” Despite the pain he was enduring the lad managed a smile and arched his back accepting the blade. Blood poured from his abs as my sword left him. I hardly had enough time to stand up straight before Daemon rammed his blade right in the middle of my huge pecs. 
“Fucccckkkkk!” I grunted against the pain as best I could. My cock was slapping against my abs. Daemon pulled his blade from me and puffed his chest out. Calix went closer and thrust his blade at Daemons huge chest. It buried itself in his right pec. The beast of a man merely grunted as it was torn from him. Calix was holding his wound with one hand has I looked him in the eye and nodded. He nodded back and I leveled my sword with his sweaty pecs and put the other hand on his shoulder. His chest rose and fell quickly as I pushed in. 
“Aaaaaffffnnnkkkk! Gods damn!”, he groaned as it was pushed deeper. As I took my blade back the lad fell to his knees. 
“I can’t do much more sir,” he said looking dejected. 
Before I could say anything Daemon said “Rest for now boy. We will all leave together.” Calix was still on his knees as Daemon came closer again. His hairy body covered in sweat and new wounds. He rubbed the area just under my belly button. “You gut yourself. I gut the boy and then me,” he said kneeling down to Calix as I knelt myself. Blood poured from my chest and belly so I knew I didn’t have much longer anyway. Calix simply looked Daemon in the eye as the big man stabbed him to the left of his hip and began to slide across. I opted for a different course and slid the sword just under my belly button where Daemon had felt. The pain felt so much different as I pushed the sword through my belly muscle. I arched my back pushing my chest out as I started to pull up. Calix was grunting more loudly as Daemons blade passed beneath his own belly button. But still he looked to me for strength so I responded by showing mine off. Flexing my arms I pulled harder trying my best to ride the pain that only continued to get worse. Daemon had completed his cut and knelt parallel to me. While I still pulled upward the cut on Calix’s belly opened and spilt his guts. 
“Ohhheenffffnkkkk fuckkk. My Gods damn guts are hanging out,” he said as he stared down in disbelief. I pulled the sword through my abs as I felt the painful pressure behind the skin building. It was like a fire burning out of me. Daemon quickly stabbed himself deep in the belly and began to pull up through his furry stomach. I felt my abs split apart as my guts bulged outwards and held in a small chunk just above my hard cock. 
“Gods damn lad this pain is fucking terrible! Uuuunnnnnngggggg!”, the words now tumbling passed my lips with a good amount of blood. Daemon was grunting in frustration as he worked his own sword through his iron hard gut. Just as he pulled the sword out he started to beat his hairy chest as his intestines forced his belly open the rest of the way. They hung around his massive dick but he continued to beat his chest with one hand while he stroked himself with the other. I realized this was our send off and was able to beat my chest as I wrapped my hand around my manhood. Soon we were all grunting like animals as we beat our chests with our guts hanging out. You could feel the manliness it was so thick. My vision began to cloud as I started to cum. 
“Aaaannnnkkfffucckkk,” I yelled.

“Uuurrrkkklllllllll,” Calix let out as he came. 
“Hhrooooooaaaaaaarrrrr,” Daemon finally grunted as our souls departed this mortal battlefield. 

With some luck, maybe even to a much more bloody and painful fight! 



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This is my first try at writing stories so let me know how I did! I don’t mind constructive criticism. 
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#2
hot... are you into dying from bullets?
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#3
Fuck bullets. This is very well written. I like the dialog a lot and it's hot, though I prefer a more fantasy oriented less focus on blood and I guess I don't want blood mentioned at all but tha'ts just me. The other thing is: I'm not sure WHY these guys would want to kill themselves when they WON the battle? I like your tone though and your characters and descriptions.
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#4
Yes great text I love it and all is explained so well we try to be present and to look well at the scene !!!
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#5
Thanks for sharing, cool story!
Read my stories at Sweat, Steel & Glory: https://sweatsteelglory.substack.com/
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#6
your stories are great. i like the idea that the chest and heart get mentioned. i hope to see more.
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#7
That was in fact quite erotic .... more please ;-)
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#8
well written but the formatting should be spacing and better; plus little to no navel action but you have a firm gasp of writing and words and dialog
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