04-10-2021, 12:46 PM
well written but the formatting should be spacing and better; plus little to no navel action but you have a firm gasp of writing and words and dialog
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The Courage of a Manly Death - by GuttedManlygod - 08-22-2020, 05:54 AM
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RE: The Courage of a Manly Death - by CHASE - 08-22-2020, 10:01 AM
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RE: The Courage of a Manly Death - by gutstab2 - 04-10-2021, 08:51 AM
RE: The Courage of a Manly Death - by Stabano - 04-10-2021, 12:46 PM
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