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Striking Roomate
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The following is just my own subjective critique and I only offer it because you have requested comments. Please be aware that a lack of comments is not uncommon on this forum and is not, in itself, a reflection of the quality of one’s work.

Your descriptive writing is very good but the non fetish sexual content is too much for me - sorry. Also I find stabbings from behind, whether or not it exits through the navel, not to be very exciting.

I would definitely encourage you to continue writing and I look forward to reading a hot new story from you.
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Striking Roomate - by stabme - 06-26-2021, 03:55 AM
RE: Striking Roomate - by stabme - 06-27-2021, 03:03 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by Predator - 06-27-2021, 09:48 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by stabme - 06-28-2021, 02:34 AM
RE: Striking Roomate - by Stabano - 06-28-2021, 11:08 AM
RE: Striking Roomate - by stabme - 06-28-2021, 12:47 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by jim825 - 06-28-2021, 05:05 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by stabme - 06-29-2021, 09:56 AM
RE: Striking Roomate - by mj000 - 06-28-2021, 08:49 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by KennyStove - 06-30-2021, 08:20 AM
RE: Striking Roomate - by justthisguy11 - 02-13-2023, 03:34 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by gyno90001 - 02-13-2023, 08:54 PM

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