06-27-2021, 09:48 PM
The following is just my own subjective critique and I only offer it because you have requested comments. Please be aware that a lack of comments is not uncommon on this forum and is not, in itself, a reflection of the quality of one’s work.
Your descriptive writing is very good but the non fetish sexual content is too much for me - sorry. Also I find stabbings from behind, whether or not it exits through the navel, not to be very exciting.
I would definitely encourage you to continue writing and I look forward to reading a hot new story from you.
Your descriptive writing is very good but the non fetish sexual content is too much for me - sorry. Also I find stabbings from behind, whether or not it exits through the navel, not to be very exciting.
I would definitely encourage you to continue writing and I look forward to reading a hot new story from you.