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Striking Roomate
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Personally, I find it quite hot to read. While the back is not my favourite target, I still like stabbings from behind if they are well written, and I think they add some nice variety to our fantasies (of course, this is purely a matter of personal taste). So, all in all, I definitely enjoyed the story.

I agree that some segments are a bit confusing and the language can feel a bit too "flowery" at times, but, given that English isn't my native language, I'm probably not the best person to comment on that aspect.

That aside, I find your writing very enjoyable, and, as Predator said, I'd encourage you to keep writing if you like it. Thanks for sharing!
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Striking Roomate - by stabme - 06-26-2021, 03:55 AM
RE: Striking Roomate - by stabme - 06-27-2021, 03:03 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by Predator - 06-27-2021, 09:48 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by stabme - 06-28-2021, 02:34 AM
RE: Striking Roomate - by Stabano - 06-28-2021, 11:08 AM
RE: Striking Roomate - by stabme - 06-28-2021, 12:47 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by jim825 - 06-28-2021, 05:05 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by stabme - 06-29-2021, 09:56 AM
RE: Striking Roomate - by mj000 - 06-28-2021, 08:49 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by KennyStove - 06-30-2021, 08:20 AM
RE: Striking Roomate - by justthisguy11 - 02-13-2023, 03:34 PM
RE: Striking Roomate - by gyno90001 - 02-13-2023, 08:54 PM

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