(06-28-2021, 05:05 PM)jim825 Wrote: That was a well-written, highly descriptive story. Thanks for a great read! I do hope you write & post more.thank you for saying that
(06-28-2021, 08:49 PM)mj000 Wrote: Personally, I find it quite hot to read. While the back is not my favourite target, I still like stabbings from behind if they are well written, and I think they add some nice variety to our fantasies (of course, this is purely a matter of personal taste). So, all in all, I definitely enjoyed the story.thank you for commenting
I agree that some segments are a bit confusing and the language can feel a bit too "flowery" at times, but, given that English isn't my native language, I'm probably not the best person to comment on that aspect.
That aside, I find your writing very enjoyable, and, as Predator said, I'd encourage you to keep writing if you like it. Thanks for sharing!