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Captured on the Plain, part 1
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Your vivid writing put me right into the action as I felt every arrow penetrate my own belly. Wish I’d thought up the young native bucks being trained how to kill, great! Looking forward to the next part.
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Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by jim825 - 10-24-2021, 09:53 AM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by gutstab2 - 10-24-2021, 12:37 PM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by Predator - 10-25-2021, 09:25 PM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by Deadpool - 10-26-2021, 10:26 AM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 2 - by jim825 - 10-28-2021, 09:27 AM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by Predator - 04-23-2022, 01:04 PM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by caeden150 - 05-18-2022, 08:01 PM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by jim825 - 05-19-2022, 08:23 PM

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