10-25-2021, 09:25 PM
Your vivid writing put me right into the action as I felt every arrow penetrate my own belly. Wish I’d thought up the young native bucks being trained how to kill, great! Looking forward to the next part.
Captured on the Plain, part 1
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Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by jim825 - 10-24-2021, 09:53 AM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by gutstab2 - 10-24-2021, 12:37 PM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by Predator - 10-25-2021, 09:25 PM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by Huronwarrior - 10-25-2021, 10:19 PM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by Deadpool - 10-26-2021, 10:26 AM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 2 - by jim825 - 10-28-2021, 09:27 AM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by Predator - 04-23-2022, 01:04 PM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by caeden150 - 05-18-2022, 08:01 PM
RE: Captured on the Plain, part 1 - by jim825 - 05-19-2022, 08:23 PM
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