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The Courage of a Manly Death
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08-22-2020, 10:01 AM
Fuck bullets. This is very well written. I like the dialog a lot and it's hot, though I prefer a more fantasy oriented less focus on blood and I guess I don't want blood mentioned at all but tha'ts just me. The other thing is: I'm not sure WHY these guys would want to kill themselves when they WON the battle? I like your tone though and your characters and descriptions.
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The Courage of a Manly Death - by GuttedManlygod - 08-22-2020, 05:54 AM
RE: The Courage of a Manly Death - by gunplayfetish - 08-22-2020, 07:50 AM
RE: The Courage of a Manly Death - by CHASE - 08-22-2020, 10:01 AM
RE: The Courage of a Manly Death - by Gladiateur1964 - 08-22-2020, 12:33 PM
RE: The Courage of a Manly Death - by Gutted Gladiator - 08-22-2020, 10:12 PM
RE: The Courage of a Manly Death - by jadsitt - 10-18-2020, 12:25 AM
RE: The Courage of a Manly Death - by gutstab2 - 04-10-2021, 08:51 AM
RE: The Courage of a Manly Death - by Stabano - 04-10-2021, 12:46 PM
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