Striking Roomate

[gyno90001]

I like the uniqueness of your writing. While back stabbing is not the norm here, it is a interesting change. Also, your phrases are different than what we normally see here which makes the whole piece refreshingly different. I think some of the action could have been tightened up a little more with slightly less commentary, but over-all this is different, unique and enjoyable. I strongly urge you to continue also - I think your concepts are excellent.