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A hunk's experience getting impaled (comes with my first attempt at a story lol)
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A hot guy is standing next to the window soaking up the sun, then a spear flies through the window and slices through his navel, and finally burying itself in his guts.
 
    At first, all he hears is the horrible squishing and crunching sounds coming from his belly as the spear landed in him, causing him to involuntarily let out a grunt. Then, he can't see anything because his brain is temporarily overloaded with the sharp, severe pain starting to blossom out from the wound like a cruel flower. When he finally understands what happened, he looks at the spear sticking out of his belly in disbelief and cant figure out what to do.


       


    Little does he know, the anonymous attacker used a high-tech spear that can still do damage to the poor victim. As the pain starts to die down after a few seconds, the spearhead starts to release a special poison that makes nerves feel like they're burning, but the horrible feeling will never die down as more of the poison contacts the exposed nerve endings.  the spear also starts to automatically move a little bit to continue to cut his guts. The poor hunk can't help but let out a loud moan as he hears the hard, unforgiving spearhead slicing up more of his soft guts and feels the torturous feeling of his lower guts seemingly on fire. As more of his guts get destroyed, blood starts leaking from his navel wound. He also can feel hot, thick, blood coming up from his throat, giving him a suffocating feeling as it slowly starts to leak from his mouth.


   

    All he can think about now is how to make the pain stop, so he tries to pull the spear from his belly. He tries to pull one time and hears another squishing sound and lets out a horrible, twisted, gargling moan as he is feeling pain worse than anything he's ever imagined as the spearhead gets caught on some of his guts as he tried to pull it out. In the middle of all of the pain and desperation, he loses all logical thinking and continues to try to pull it out, thinking that somehow he would be ok if he did so. The pain forces him on his knees. He tries 3 more times, and each time he releases a loud moaning-scream in response to each new level of pain he didn't know he was capable of feeling. 
    On the 4th time, the spear becomes loose and starts sliding out of his belly, making wet crunching sounds as the spearhead rips through the final few pieces of gut in the way. The tip is almost out of his navel whenever the spearhead loudly rips through a bundle of nerves, sending a violent shudder throughout his beautiful body, and causing him to lose his balance, falling forward. This causes the end of the spear to hit the floor and force the tip right back into his body, forging a new path in his lower gut. He lets out a loud half-moan half-crying sound as the spear completely impales him and pokes out of his back, and his helpless body slowly slides along the spear until he hits the floor. 
    He starts letting out strange sounds of half-crying and half-moaning as he finally realizes that he will never get up from the floor, and all he can do now is wait for the pain to end.
    His assailant watches from his apartment balcony in the building across the street, from where he threw the spear. The assailant is quite happy, as he can watch over the next hour or so as his victim squirms on the ground in pain. He wishes the victim would have fallen with his sexy abs facing up for him to see, but at least after the poor guy dies he'll have a nice scene to look at for a few days. Until the body starts to rot, at least.

   
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#2
You have a great way with words. You described the feelings exactly!
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#3
Great story. Love the descriptive narrative.
And As Always,
Happy Battlings and a Glorious Death to You All!!!!

B&D
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#4
good story dude...keep writing !
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