I have this idea for a story or something that could be made into a movie clip. I’ve always had a fascination with big strong guys with perfect physique, confident, powerful, seemingly indestructible, and when they suddenly get that sword piercing those perfect muscles and he is caught by surprise, suddenly realising that what was almost unthinkable has happened to him, there is a look of pain but at the same time shock and the realisation that what he had inflicted on so many others on the battlefield, has now become his end.

My story would be based on a strong muscular with perfect looks - an Adonis. Who like Achilles in Greek mythology, is indestructible, except for one weakness, if he falls in love with a guy and has sex, at the moment of orgasm is the only point where his protection is not there and he can be killed by a sword piercing his heart from the back. The look on his face as the sword pierced his back goes through his heart and the silver point comes out the front, when he looks down to see the point silver end of the sword, pain and the final acknowledgment of his death is clear in his eyes and facial expression as he falls to his knees and slowly weaken and falls onto his back lifeless

https://www.dropbox.com/s/pgk9vc1s8jegrt...d.avi?dl=0

https://www.dropbox.com/s/mk6wdcbv4f9ia8...y.mp4?dl=0

found on youtube
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ttY4Y-gx_f4
starts at 1:18:00

Found this on Youtube...not a bad little video and some good gut stabs

https://youtu.be/EFimCKaZABY

Hello dear Friends,
I would like to start a little experiment: I would like to show you how I develop my stories:
I think about images, then I create them, maybe discard them, recreate them.
Ha ha, sometimes I wake up in the middle of the night, turn on the computer and just go to work. 
This is the idea that came to me spontaneously yesterday:

An arena, fight to the death, hostages and I wanna use my fantasy chars.

I'll post my thoughts on it and I look forward to your comments your wishes or ideas.

Have fun.

   

The battle ended on the grassy field just outside the city. Marcus thought he could protect Lucas by falling across his lover's body, but the enemy warrior saw it as a chance to take out two opponents with one stroke. Marcus and Lucas shot their final wads together. Fallen warriors from both sides filled the battlefield, their boners still standing at attention. Soon the winners would begin collecting their trophies.

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Would any of you warriors like to help me when I fall on my sword? Maybe you'd grab me round the waist from behind, using your weight to push me onto the sword, and then feeling the tip of the sword penetrating through your own navel and guts as we fall together onto the ground?
I'd appreciate your thoughts on this.

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Would like to include the enemy.
What is your story about this picture?

From Slaughter High 1986.